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22 July 2008 @ 10:34 pm
Fic: Dropping Eaves. Hisagi/Kira.  
Title: Dropping Eaves
Rating: PG-13 for sexual theme
Pairing: Hisagi Shuuhei x Kira Izuru, Madarame Ikkaku x Ayasegawa Yumichika
Notes/Warnings: Just a short drabble/ficlet. Yaoi. Fluff. Written for Theme #40: Writer's Choice - Eavesdropping @ [info]50scenes
Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach or any of its sexy characters. I just borrow them and make them do my nasty bidding. They like it. A lot.

“unhh…not so hard, please…” Kira’s voice floated loud and clear through the door one Madarame Ikkaku just happened to be walking past.

“…ah…ah! Shuu!” A loud gasp only barely managed to cover up the sound of the bald shinigami's jaw hitting the floor. Breathless whispers reached his ears and he felt a shiver crawl up his spine when he heard Kira begin to whimper. Against his better judgment, he tiptoed closer toward the door to listen.

What he heard damn near killed him.

“Mmmm…Shuu…gods, I’m going to kill y—ah! Yessss…uunhhhh…”

Yumichika walked around the corner and very nearly bumped into Ikkaku’s back.

“Ikka, what—mmph!” His next words were muffled by a large hand clamped tightly over his mouth. He struggled silently against his captor, his eyes flashing promises of pain and possibly death until he caught sight of Ikkaku’s flushed face.

“…nngggh…Shuu! What are you—unnnhhh…ah!”

Oh.

“Ahh! Aaahh!

Ohhhh.

Ikkaku felt soft lips smile against his palm and finally let go of the smaller man in his arms. Blue-violet eyes twinkled with mirth as the slighter shinigami smirked at him before leaning in to whisper softly against his ear: “Get your mind out of the gutter, love.”

Ikkaku’s brows drew together in confusion only to shoot up his forehead when Kira let out a particularly loud cry. Yumi only smiled and took the bald shinigami’s hand in his.

“Ever had one of Shuuhei’s massages? Best hands in Sereitei,” He said. Then quickly added “Well, second best,” as he gave the large hand in his a tender squeeze.

“…gods, Shuu, you’re…mmmm…Shuuhei…”

Yumi tugged on his lover. “Let’s go,” he whispered. “These two are giving me ideas.”

Finally the bald shinigami spoke and gave him a lopsided grin. “What kinda ideas?”

Yumi smiled. “You’ll see.”

Behind the thin wood and paper of the door, two figures moved in perfect frenzied synchronization until the brunette stopped and tore himself away from the graceful curve of the blond’s neck.

“Are they gone?” Kira asked breathlessly, reaching up for his lover even as the words left his lips.

Shuuhei listened for a moment before his handsome face split into a wide grin. “They’re gone.” He said, grasping Kira’s hips and pulling him higher up his thighs, eliciting a moan from the writhing blond. He smirked and traced kiss-swollen lips with a finger, feeling Kira’s breath ghost over his skin. “Next time,” he said, “I gag you.”

Kira grasped the tantalizing digit and bit it tenderly. “Next time, I top.”

END.

...someone write me the next time? 8D

a/n: I think I lowered my IQ with this one. What the hell, Antha? What the hell?! Forgive me. I cannot stop laughing! XD

And lookie what [info]ceestar drew!



Ain't she just awesome?! ♥

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SZP.: Bleach ›› Buu~![info]barukode on July 22nd, 2008 02:54 pm (UTC)

Jesus Christ.
I.. I.. I'm at a loss for words. Speechless aside from: Antha, I fucking love you.
Antha: Kira Violet[info]antha_aryn on July 23rd, 2008 07:44 am (UTC)
XD Ahahaha At a loss for words in a good way, I hope!

Thanks for reading and commenting! I fucking love you, too! ♥
(no subject) - [info]barukode on July 23rd, 2008 10:46 am (UTC)
Silver Harmony: Kira/Hisagi[info]silverharmony on July 22nd, 2008 03:06 pm (UTC)
Hahahahah, this is GOLD. XD And yes, Kira should really top once in a while.
Antha: Yummm[info]antha_aryn on July 23rd, 2008 07:47 am (UTC)
Lmao. I had a LOT of fun with this one. XD

Thank you reading and commenting!
The Bison Be Jammin': Kickin' it Prairie Style: *CLING*[info]jamminbison on July 22nd, 2008 04:29 pm (UTC)
Lawl. This was made of pure win. You are made of pure win!

Eavesdropping has to be one of the better prompts out there~
Antha: YaoiAddict[info]antha_aryn on July 23rd, 2008 07:48 am (UTC)
Lol. Thank you!

And ahahaha yes, eavesdropping is SO easy to play with.

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥
Jae: Gin & Izuru[info]erinilliana on July 22nd, 2008 04:42 pm (UTC)
Ikkaku was right in having his mind in the gutter. xD

This is awesome, the twist from the usual eavesdropping stories is gold. I cracked up at the massage part - I don't know why, I just did.
Antha: YaoiAddict[info]antha_aryn on July 23rd, 2008 07:49 am (UTC)
Haha Ikkaku knows best! XD

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and commenting!
[info]hu3long2 on July 22nd, 2008 04:50 pm (UTC)
Love the twist at the end! I'm glad you exposed the answer to "did they, or didn't they?"
Antha: Plushie - ShuuKira[info]antha_aryn on July 23rd, 2008 07:50 am (UTC)
Lol! Of course it did! I wouldn't have it any other way! XD

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥
beautifvl_flaw[info]beautifvl_flaw on July 22nd, 2008 07:03 pm (UTC)
This was a great read. It made me giggle and brightened my day.
Antha: Soi Cam[info]antha_aryn on July 23rd, 2008 07:50 am (UTC)
I'm glad it did! :)

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥
calmingeffects[info]calmingeffects on July 22nd, 2008 07:52 pm (UTC)
Holy Shit!!!!

that is amazing!! I loved this....wow.....I was getting read to go take a nap and I saw your post and though NO MEGAN STAY AWAKE and I am so glad I did....

WOW that....that was...amazing!

I love love love that Ikkaku was listening in and that Yumi corrected himself and said SECOND best...that was very sweet...also Yumi's death glare...cause really you just KNOW he can give those death glares.

plus....seriously....Mmm Mmmm Mmmmm
Antha: Yummm[info]antha_aryn on July 23rd, 2008 07:54 am (UTC)
8D LMAO I'm SO glad you liked it because even though it was really simple, it's one of my faves. I couldn't stop snickering while I wrote it. XD

And Yumi...I really think he'd be sweet with Ikkaku or at least lose his fangs and claws once in a while when he's with baldie. Yumi's Death Glare of Imminent Doom = WIN.

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and commenting and I cannot wait for your ShuuKira entry!!!!!!
"Bitch" is my middle name: sexyryuu[info]shiawase_ai on July 22nd, 2008 10:26 pm (UTC)
Jesus H. Christ.

Oh Yumi you sly dog you. Massage my ASS.
Antha: Kira Violet[info]antha_aryn on July 23rd, 2008 07:55 am (UTC)
Lol! Yumi = win!

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥
ceestar[info]ceestar on July 23rd, 2008 07:04 am (UTC)
“Next time,” he said, “I gag you.”

asdfhgdkfdffpffffttttt............. oh ... oh god... Antha you have me in a PUDDLE! A very running puddle! That was ... buhhh ...

And Izu... "next time, I top" ... oh Izu you adorable little thing XD Something tells me he's going to have to fight for the position.

Awww I wanna write you a next time but I've never written nor do I know how to write smut.
Antha: Yummm[info]antha_aryn on July 23rd, 2008 07:57 am (UTC)
SQUEE!!!! ::bottles up puddle!Cee in jar:: XD

Ahahaha Izuru topping makes me rotflmao! He's going to have to fight and fight HARD before I write him as a top!

And don't worry about writing the next time! The plot bunny is already munching on my brain! You can do the art instead lmao kidding

Thank you for reading and commenting, Cee! Can't wait for your ShuuKira entry!!!!!!
(no subject) - [info]ceestar on July 23rd, 2008 11:07 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]antha_aryn on July 23rd, 2008 02:42 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]ceestar on July 23rd, 2008 02:44 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]antha_aryn on July 23rd, 2008 03:01 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]ceestar on July 23rd, 2008 10:06 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]antha_aryn on July 24th, 2008 02:21 pm (UTC)
Rosaria: cynical[info]yakunitatanai on July 23rd, 2008 01:51 pm (UTC)
The twist, it wins. XDDDDDDDD It's exactly the opposite of expected. IT'S LIKE REVERSE IRONY OR SOMETHING COOL LIKE THAT.

win.
Antha: GinKira Sunset[info]antha_aryn on July 23rd, 2008 02:44 pm (UTC)
Ahahahaha I'm glad you liked it! I was worried I made it all too obvious but I guess not!

Thank you for reading and commenting!!!!! ♥
eddieblackmaru: Thug Love[info]eddieblackmaru on July 23rd, 2008 03:11 pm (UTC)
I loves it. That is my favorite pairings....:)
Antha: Insatiable!Shuu[info]antha_aryn on July 23rd, 2008 03:18 pm (UTC)
Is it? Then you must join [info]shuukira. The whole comm is dedicated to them! ♥

And this August 18th is the comm's very first birthday and we're having a lovely contest to celebrate. You can expect more ShuuKira goodness to come! ♥

Thank you for reading and commenting! I do hope to see you around the comm! *is a shameless mod*
(no subject) - [info]antha_aryn on July 23rd, 2008 03:20 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]eddieblackmaru on July 23rd, 2008 03:40 pm (UTC)
eddieblackmaru: Drunkie and Sickie[info]eddieblackmaru on July 23rd, 2008 03:34 pm (UTC)
I love ikkaku x yumi best, but I also love shu and kira. Although I also love kira x gin...although all the good fanfics end with blood and tears...

my all time favorite pairing of bleach is the one my icon pimps. kyouraku and juushiro

will join the comm tho ;)
Antha[info]antha_aryn on July 24th, 2008 02:14 pm (UTC)
Oooooh I started with ShunUki as my fave pairing as well. But then it changed to GinKira then IkkakuKira and finally ShuuKira. Kira Kira Kira Kira. XD And yey! A new member to the comm! Thank you for joining! ♥
taken hostage by the memory of curly wurly: shuuxkira[info]yawns_widely on July 23rd, 2008 10:36 pm (UTC)
Adorable ... adorably hot that is. The 'gag' made my stomach do something funny - honestly. I like your inclusion of Yumi - it's always good to have him in a fic.

I do love your style of writing, would it ever be possible to corrupt you to other pairings? ... Byakuya?
Antha: YaoiAddict[info]antha_aryn on July 24th, 2008 02:17 pm (UTC)
EEEEE!!!! IT'S ROZ!!!!! OMG IT'S BEEN AGES!!!!!!!!!!! How are ya?!

And yes, Yumi is the spark that makes any fic shine. ♥

And me? Write Byakuya? That would take some practice especially assuming you'll want fluff and humor. (Bya + fluff and humor = HUH?) What pairing do you want? I WILL TRY MY VERY B EST FOR YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
annieroo2: Shuuhei[info]annieroo2 on July 24th, 2008 06:36 am (UTC)
Hehehe! That was awesome. I loved the twist ending, it was unexpected and fun. :)
Antha: PishPosh[info]antha_aryn on July 24th, 2008 02:19 pm (UTC)
Oh wow it's been a while! 8D ::waves enthusiastically::

I'm glad you liked it! I was worried I had made it all too obvious but I'm glad that wasn't the case! Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

(no subject) - [info]annieroo2 on July 28th, 2008 07:32 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]antha_aryn on July 31st, 2008 09:47 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]annieroo2 on July 31st, 2008 07:56 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]antha_aryn on August 1st, 2008 01:43 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]annieroo2 on August 1st, 2008 05:04 am (UTC)
Ginny: Bleach Renji HOT[info]ginnyvos on July 27th, 2008 03:10 pm (UTC)
So. Much. Awesomeness. If all of Schuu's massages turn out like that, I want one... Scratch that, I want one any way!
Antha[info]antha_aryn on July 28th, 2008 02:14 pm (UTC)
I know, right?! Would KILL to have that man give me a massage! XD

Thank you for reading and commenting!
Nique: L lollipop[info]january_summer on July 31st, 2008 09:24 pm (UTC)
Awwh. This was cute. ;;
Antha: Kira Violet[info]antha_aryn on August 1st, 2008 01:44 am (UTC)
I'm glad you think so! ^^

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥
Chibi[info]chibicoffee on August 10th, 2008 06:09 am (UTC)
Ah! That was win. I haven't read fanfics in awhile, but I am so glad that I stumbled across this.

Very well done, inappropriate things flowing through my mind now, very well done indeed~
Antha: Yummm[info]antha_aryn on August 10th, 2008 01:29 pm (UTC)
8D I'm glad you liked it! You should share them inappropriate thoughts you've got in your mind there! XD

Thank you for reading and commenting!
(no subject) - [info]chibicoffee on August 11th, 2008 03:39 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]antha_aryn on August 11th, 2008 06:40 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]chibicoffee on August 11th, 2008 07:44 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]antha_aryn on August 11th, 2008 08:04 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]chibicoffee on August 11th, 2008 03:47 pm (UTC)
Crow Low[info]blood_crow on August 12th, 2008 03:17 am (UTC)
MUWAHAHA ANTHA! This fic is good as sin xD And you think that people are out of your league, PSHHHHHHH LIES. So did Yumi really KNOW what was going on in there? He must have, the sneaky thing. You must do a sequel >:O A sequel of Kaku and Yumi!! I love all the Kira sounds btw, and you had me all O.O from the very beginning. I ARE LOVE THIS <3 *HUGS*
Antha[info]antha_aryn on August 12th, 2008 01:27 pm (UTC)
OH CROW YOU IS TOO KIND! ♥

Yumi? OF COURSE he knew what was going on in there!

AND YES I ARE WANTS A SEQUEL OF THIS SO BAD BUT DO NOT HAVE THE BRAINCELLS TO WRITE IT MYSELF!!!!! Hence my begging for someone else to do that for me. XD

I ARE *HEARTS* YOU!!!!!!
kumori_sama_23: Uryuu Kitty[info]kumori_sama_23 on September 19th, 2008 10:05 pm (UTC)
Interesting.... Very Well Written!
Antha[info]antha_aryn on September 20th, 2008 12:54 am (UTC)
I'm glad you think so! THank you for reading and commenting!
 
 

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